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Run as fast as you can by MayaWolf13 Run as fast as you can by MayaWolf13
That is Maya running XD and that title is because of the soccer match we had last Sunday..we lost it... In my team are a lot people that are to lazy to run.... and that was really annoying, because then I have to run their ,,part" too -,-. So I shouted that sentence toward them and everybody heard it XD and looked at me. I hope you like that drawing maybe you can make a critique

Art and char. (c) MayaWolf13


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My little soccer ball by MayaWolf13Soccer is my life by MayaWolf13gray wolf by MayaWolf13
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Okay, so this is my VERY first critique, so bear with me. :) I just saw that you wanted a critique and I thought it'd be fun to give it a go!

First off, I seriously LOVE this piece. It's definitely one of my favorites that you've done.
Here's what I adore about it:
:bulletgreen: The pose is so dynamic and full of energy! I greatly admire anyone who can draw a really nice running pose. A lot of people draw the legs splayed out all weird, but you balanced it very well. It looks very natural. :)
:bulletgreen: This anatomy is seriously some of the best you've done. :D
:bulletgreen: The way you color fur is very smooth and almost realistic. I seriously love it!

Here are a few things that could make it even better: (and DON'T stress over any of these. I think they're all very minor things, and you're already such a fantastic artist!)

:bulletgreen: Maybe make her head just SLIGHTLY bigger? Her muzzle's the right size, but I think the whole thing would be spot-on if you'd just made her skull a little bigger and rounder.
:bulletgreen: Since you do anatomy so well, I think you could be really good at defining the muscles a bit more. Look at diagrams of a wolf's muscle structure, and shade them in a bit when you draw! I hope that makes sense. :P If you define some of her muscle, especially on her legs, you can potentially make her look even more powerful.
:bulletgreen: I LOVE how smooth your fur style is, but I think you could benefit from throwing a bit of brown, black, and even some golden colors in her fur. Real gray wolves have flecks and streaks in their fur when the light catches them. If you can capture that effect here, you'll be a truly FANTASTIC artist.

Whelp, I hope that made sense and I hope it helps you out a little! Like I said, This is seriously one of the best things I've seen from you. GREAT job, love! :hug:
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Sopecartoons Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lovely artwork!
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MayaWolf13 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :)
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Sopecartoons Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome :)
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VZdrawART Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Genial!! Ich schau mich grad in deiner gallerie mal um!! :D
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MayaWolf13 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
dankeschön :)  Ich hoffe es gefällt dir :D
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VZdrawART Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ich liebe deinen stil, er ist ähnlich wie meiner, nur das die formen und so anders sind!

Das fell ist bei uns auch gleich. Ich benutze aber pastel stiffte, du? :D
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MayaWolf13 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
danke :D ja deinen stil habe ich schon gesehen, den mag ich auch sehr.

Ich benutze Polychromos, manchmal auch farber castell stifte wenn ich die farben nicht habe für polychromos.
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VZdrawART Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ok!!

Ich arbeite grad dran wolf studien zu machen, ich möchte realistischer zeichnen. Aber meinen Fell stil behalte ich
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MayaWolf13 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ich versuche die anatomie realistisch hinzubekommen, aber mit einer spur meines eigenen styles, das fell lasse ich auch so :D
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VZdrawART Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
^^

Ich bin grad bei den augen, schädel und ohren hab ich schon fertig. Ich glaub ich stell die mal auf dA :D
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